Thursday, September 16, 2010

The Swing


There was a tall, tall swing 
standing proudly in Grandma's yard. 
I was cradled by the black, plastic seat,
holding tightly to the cool, metal chains.
The wooden frame stretched up, up
into the inviting blue sky.   
back and forth
back and forth
My toes softly brushed the grass,
combing through each tender blade.
My hair rushed around my face,
tickling my cheeks, my nose.
Then gently it was pulled back,
a curly comet's tail trailing behind me.
back and forth
back and forth
I leaned way back,
closing my eyes.
I heard the swoosh of the wind
flooding my ears. 
I saw the hazy red-orange
dancing behind my eyelids.
I smelled the sweet, pink roses
growing under the kitchen window.
back and forth
back and forth
My mind was quieted
by the steady, soothing rhythm.
I dreamed of flight,
soaring while seated.
I embraced this freedom,
sweeping, and weightless.


"What's better: backwards or forwards?  Write a story about a swing...Can you capture the swing's rhythm in your writing?"  I found this writing prompt at this Random Prompt Generator.  Now have some fun writing your own!

3 comments:

Christy said...

Beautiful

Becky said...

You are quite the writer, my dear. Lovely.

Paige said...

How have I known you so long, so intimately, and never knew until this blog what an incredible writer you are???

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